Midterm Results

Here are the results. After talking to Ms. Lee and Mr. Tweedie, I lowered my scores and gave more B's to fall in line with them for the sake of consistency.  It is true that the prompt clearly stated "your narrative should entirely be in transit - not beginning or ending at the place of origin."  Some of you really deviated from the prompt, others just a little. 

I also based the scores a bit heavily on length and syntax.  Some were very short, and others had the usual grammatical issues.  That said, most were very "okay" if not similar.  Lots of vision trip and airplane experiences.   If you wrote about something a little bit unique and managed to include a theme, you scored higher. 

I think I was waaaay to generous with the Earthlings scores, so expect harsher scoring in the future.

Kickback	89.60
Optimus Prime	92.00
Bumblebee	90.00
Ratchet	90.20
Ironhide	90.70
Mudflap	89.40
Jolt	89.40
Inferno	89.90
Sentinal	89.00
Wheeljak	89.40
Megatron	90.30
Demolisher	89.60
Star Scream	89.90
Ravage	90.50
Devastator	89.00
Rampage	91.50
Scrapper	89.10
Laserbeak	90.00