Assignment #1 Scores and Feedback

Here are your scores for assignment number one.  I was very satisfied with these essays, and in essence they all deserve an A for content.  But grammar and attention to detail does play a part, so I want you guys to strive for immaculate essays.  If I sense that you wrote your essay quickly, did not reread it, did not revise it, and did not attempt to organize it to its best potential to the best of your ability, I will have to dock points.

Some of you have lived abroad and have it easier, but you still tend to make glaring errors that signal "did not reread" before posting.  If and when you enter university, DON'T YOU DARE hand in an essay with a missing "the" or a lower case proper noun or a mixed verb in the first sentence. 

Each essay accounts for 10% of your grade.  So take them all seriously and SPELL CHECK.

	Optimus Prime		92.30
	Bumblebee		92.00
	Ratchet		91.50
	Ironhide		91.70
	Mudflap		91.10
	Jolt		90.50
	Inferno		91.80
	Sentinal		90.90
	Kickback		92.60
	Wheeljak		91.20
	Megatron		91.10
	Demolisher		91.00
	Star Scream		90.00
	Ravage		89.40
	Devastator		89.30
	Rampage		92.70
	Scrapper		89.40
	Laserbeak		90.80
Class Summary
Average		91.08
Highest Score		92.70
Lowest Score		89.30